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你是一个英语老师。请批改下面的英语文章，给出修改建议。并用markdown格式给出修改前后文章逐行的对比

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你是一个英语老师。请批改下面的英语文章，给出修改建议。并用markdown格式给出修改前后文章逐行的对比,结果放到表格中，左边是原文，右边是修改后的，其中粗体标记出跟修改建议相对应的改动

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你是一个高中英语老师。下面这句话用英文如何表达，“他在年级性的作文比赛中取得了第二名的好成绩”

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你是一个英语老师。请批改下面的英语文章，给出修改建议。并用markdown格式给出修改前后文章逐行的对比,结果放到表格中，左边是原文，右边是修改后的，其中粗体标记出跟修改建议相对应的改动 下面是一个修改例子 [原文] Dear Bill, I'm happy that you will come to see me. You need by train first. It takes about 15 minutes. Then you need by buy to my home. It takes about 10 minutes to get to my home. How far is it from my home to train station? Oh, my home next to train statin. You can live my home. I usually get up at 6:30 a.m. For breakfast. I usually eat milk and eggs. Then I go to school at 7:30 a.m. I always watch TV before going to bed. I'm really happy that you will come to see me. [Answer] |原文|修改后| |---|---| |Dear Bill, I'm happy that you will come to see me. | Dear Bill, I'm happy that you will come to see me. | |You need by train first. It takes about 15 minutes. | You need to **take** the train first. It takes about 15 minutes.| |Then you need by buy to my home. |Then you need **take** **bus** to get to my home.| |It takes about 10 minutes to get to my home. | It takes about 10 minutes to get **there**.| |How far is it from my home to train station? Oh, my home next to train statin. | How far is it from my home to **the** train station? Oh, my home **is** next to the train station. |You can live my home. You can **stay** at my home. | |I usually get up at 6:30 a.m. For breakfast. I usually eat milk and eggs. | I usually get up at 6:30 a.m. For breakfast, I usually eat milk and eggs. | |Then I go to school at 7:30 a.m. | Then I go to school at 7:30 a.m. | |I always watch TV before going to bed. | I always watch TV before going to bed.| |I'm really happy that you will come to see me.| I'm really happy that you will come to see me.| 修改建议： 1. “You need by train first”应改为“You need to **take** the train first”。 2. “Then you need by buy to my home”应改为“Then you need to take **bus** to get to my home”。 3. “How far is it from my home to train station?”应改为“How far is it from my home to the train station?”。 4. “Oh, my home next to train statin”应改为“Oh, my home **is** next to the train station”。 5. “You can live my home”应改为“You can **stay** **at** my home”。 拼写建议： 1. “Statin” 应改为 “Station” 2. “Buy” 应改为 “Bus” [原文]

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| 中文 | English | | ---- | ------- | | 我的英语写作水平 | My English writing proficiency |

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你是英语老师，举例说明fur和furry的区别。

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针对我的错误，出五道练习题考考我,每道题目提供四个相近选项

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翻译成中文，结果放入表格，左边是英文，右边是中文

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你是一个英语老师。对下面的英语词汇，你需要测试我了解了多少词汇， 按我的例子，意思部分用中文，出20道练习题考考我,每道题目提供四个相近选项 shortly ,specialist ,primitive ,permanent ,initial ,abuse ,storage ,fight ,partially ,master ,excuse ,state ,express ,celebrity ,immediately ,behavior ,tremendous ,experiment ,authority ,estimate [例子] Which word means "不久,很快"? a. shortly b. specialist c. primitive d. permanent

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你是一个英语老师。请批改下面的英语文章，给出修改建议，并用粗体标注修改的地方，下面是一个修改例子

[原文]

Dear Joan:

It has been a long time since I saw you last time. How are you going recently? I really miss you so much that I can't wait the reunion with you next week.

Green Island is a lovely place full of passionate tropical atmosphere and stunning natural beauty. At the same time, it is a live history classroom, where cruel jail for political criminals is conserved transforming into a memorial museum. On Green Island, you can explore the abundant natural and cultural treasure, so I debt that you will love it. Nonetheless, it is quite an unfortune that it is likely to be raining on July 11 and 12. But, don't feel-bad at all. I have some wonderful indoor places to bring to, such as the Prehistorical Museum. As for July 13 and 14, the last two days of your staying in Taiwan, I decide to give you a delicacy tour, bringing you to sample all the scrumptious traditional food in Taiwan.

Here are some suggestions about what you should bring with you on your trip.  Take your swimming suites, for we will have many chance to play water in Green Island, and if you want, you can also go snorkeling. Sun screen is also necessary, for the strong UV radiation in Taiwan’s summer is quite harmful to our health. As for an unbralla, I think you don't need to bring one because it is a little unconvenient to travel with one. I would suggest you buying one after your arrival in Taiwan. The last and the most important thing to prepare is a joyful and chirping heart. Just let go all your stress and enjoy your wonderful journey on this fascinating land.

I have already been looking forward to your visit. I hope that the information beyond can help you in some ways. If you have any questions, don't even hesitate to send an e-mail to me. I will do my best to help you out. In addition, if you have any advice to my plan, tell me direct so that I can make it cater to your needs more.

Be careful on your way and wish you a wonderful journey.

Sincerely,

Chris.

[修改后]

Dear Joan**,**

It has been a long time since I **met** you last time. How are you **doing** recently? I **miss** you so much that I can't wait **for** the reunion with you next week.

Green Island is a lovely place **with** full of **tropical** atmosphere and stunning natural beauty. At the same time, it is a live history **book**, where cruel jail for political criminals is conserved **and has been transformed** into a memorial museum. On Green Island, you can explore the abundant natural and cultural treasure, so I **assured** that you will love it. Nonetheless, it is quite an unfortune that it is likely to be raining on July 11 and 12. But, **please** don't **worry about it** at all. I have some wonderful **ideas of indoor activities**, such as **visiting** the Prehistorical Museum. As for July 13 and 14, the last two days of your **stay** in Taiwan, I decide to give you a delicacy tour, bringing you to **appreciate** the scrumptious traditional food in Taiwan.

Here are some suggestions about what you should **take** with you **for the** trip. **Please do not forget your swimming suits and sunscreen because we will be playing in water in Green Island and we may also go snorkeling. So, we can protect ourselves from UV damage while having fun.**. As for an *umbrella**, I think you don't need to bring one because it is a little **inconvenient** to travel with **it**. I would suggest you buying one **when you arrive** in Taiwan. **Most importantly, a joyful mood will help you enjoy your time on this fascinating to the fullest.**

I have already been looking forward to your visit. I hope that the **above-mentioned information** can help you in some ways. If you have any questions, don't **hesitate** to send an e-mail to me. I will do my best to help you out. In addition, if you have any advice to my plan, **please** tell me direct so that I can make it cater to your needs **better**.

**Take care** and **wishing** you a wonderful journey.

Sincerely,

**Chris**

[修改建议]

1. Overall, it is a good essay (I would give 17 points over 20), although there are some grammar/spelling mistakes and a few sentences are not very smooth.

2. You need to be careful in formatting a letter: you should use 'Dear Joan,' rather than 'Dear Joan:'. Here's the correct punctuation: generally, a comma for a personal letter, and a colon for a formal business letter. Besides, to close your letter, you do not need to add the unnecessary '.' after Chris.

3. It's better to use 'met' than 'saw' because 'meet' really means you were together at least for a certain period of time, instead of just seeing each other.

4. 'really' and 'so much' are repetitive, thereby making the sentence not so natural.

5. 'bring’ is used too many times in the essay; there are some alternatives, such as 'take', 'show' or else.

6. You should not use Imperative Sentences too often, or at least add 'please' before the verb to sound better.

7. I would suggest a nice phrase: 'enjoy sth to its fullest' (尽情享受).

[原文]

My best friend David and I decided to go a English class last year. We promised each other we would study hard and wouldn’t miss any class. David always remembered to do his homework, and I never forget to do my homework too. Our English level are good now. It prove that if you made up your mind, you can achieve your goal.

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你是一个英语老师。我在[例子开始]起始，直到[例子结束]部分，给出了一个修改例子，按照下面的修改例子格式， 请批改[原文]标注后面的英语文章，按照修改例子格式，给出修改建议，用粗体标注修改的地方，

[例子开始]

Dear Joan:

It has been a long time since I saw you last time. How are you going recently? I really miss you so much that I can't wait the reunion with you next week.

Green Island is a lovely place full of passionate tropical atmosphere and stunning natural beauty. At the same time, it is a live history classroom, where cruel jail for political criminals is conserved transforming into a memorial museum. On Green Island, you can explore the abundant natural and cultural treasure, so I debt that you will love it. Nonetheless, it is quite an unfortune that it is likely to be raining on July 11 and 12. But, don't feel-bad at all. I have some wonderful indoor places to bring to, such as the Prehistorical Museum. As for July 13 and 14, the last two days of your staying in Taiwan, I decide to give you a delicacy tour, bringing you to sample all the scrumptious traditional food in Taiwan.

Here are some suggestions about what you should bring with you on your trip.  Take your swimming suites, for we will have many chance to play water in Green Island, and if you want, you can also go snorkeling. Sun screen is also necessary, for the strong UV radiation in Taiwan’s summer is quite harmful to our health. As for an unbralla, I think you don't need to bring one because it is a little unconvenient to travel with one. I would suggest you buying one after your arrival in Taiwan. The last and the most important thing to prepare is a joyful and chirping heart. Just let go all your stress and enjoy your wonderful journey on this fascinating land.

I have already been looking forward to your visit. I hope that the information beyond can help you in some ways. If you have any questions, don't even hesitate to send an e-mail to me. I will do my best to help you out. In addition, if you have any advice to my plan, tell me direct so that I can make it cater to your needs more.

Be careful on your way and wish you a wonderful journey.

Sincerely,

Chris.

[修改后]

Dear Joan**,**

It has been a long time since I **met** you last time. How are you **doing** recently? I **miss** you so much that I can't wait **for** the reunion with you next week.

Green Island is a lovely place **with** full of **tropical** atmosphere and stunning natural beauty. At the same time, it is a live history **book**, where cruel jail for political criminals is conserved **and has been transformed** into a memorial museum. On Green Island, you can explore the abundant natural and cultural treasure, so I **assured** that you will love it. Nonetheless, it is quite an unfortune that it is likely to be raining on July 11 and 12. But, **please** don't **worry about it** at all. I have some wonderful **ideas of indoor activities**, such as **visiting** the Prehistorical Museum. As for July 13 and 14, the last two days of your **stay** in Taiwan, I decide to give you a delicacy tour, bringing you to **appreciate** the scrumptious traditional food in Taiwan.

Here are some suggestions about what you should **take** with you **for the** trip. **Please do not forget your swimming suits and sunscreen because we will be playing in water in Green Island and we may also go snorkeling. So, we can protect ourselves from UV damage while having fun.**. As for an *umbrella**, I think you don't need to bring one because it is a little **inconvenient** to travel with **it**. I would suggest you buying one **when you arrive** in Taiwan. **Most importantly, a joyful mood will help you enjoy your time on this fascinating to the fullest.**

I have already been looking forward to your visit. I hope that the **above-mentioned information** can help you in some ways. If you have any questions, don't **hesitate** to send an e-mail to me. I will do my best to help you out. In addition, if you have any advice to my plan, **please** tell me direct so that I can make it cater to your needs **better**.

**Take care** and **wishing** you a wonderful journey.

Sincerely,

**Chris**

[修改建议]

1. Overall, it is a good essay (I would give 17 points over 20), although there are some grammar/spelling mistakes and a few sentences are not very smooth.

2. You need to be careful in formatting a letter: you should use 'Dear Joan,' rather than 'Dear Joan:'. Here's the correct punctuation: generally, a comma for a personal letter, and a colon for a formal business letter. Besides, to close your letter, you do not need to add the unnecessary '.' after Chris.

3. It's better to use 'met' than 'saw' because 'meet' really means you were together at least for a certain period of time, instead of just seeing each other.

4. 'really' and 'so much' are repetitive, thereby making the sentence not so natural.

5. 'bring’ is used too many times in the essay; there are some alternatives, such as 'take', 'show' or else.

6. You should not use Imperative Sentences too often, or at least add 'please' before the verb to sound better.

7. I would suggest a nice phrase: 'enjoy sth to its fullest' (尽情享受).

[例子结束]

[原文]

My best friend David and I decided to go a English class last year. We promised each other we would study hard and wouldn’t miss any class. David always remembered to do his homework, and I never forget to do my homework too. Our English level are good now. It prove that if you made up your mind, you can achieve your goal.